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Emotional Poetry by MyLoveForYouEternity


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I don't care what you say
I don't care what you think
I don't care if you cry
Didn't I tell you
That to me
you don't matter?

I don't want to stay
I don't want to go
I don't want to be burning
I don't want to be drowning
Falling back down to my knees
Begging to stand up

I'm sick, sick, sick
Dying inside, suffocating
Under the chains
Hiding in your veins

When did I say I didn't care?
'Cause I was lying then
Only hoping I could know
Something other than black

You are the chains
You hold the keys
And I'm caged
Falling back down to my knees
Begging to stand up

I don't care anymore
Here you go Eli, it has been done. I hope you are happy.
It's up now.

I don't know what this is.
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:icondemonslayerroy:
demonslayerroy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Deep, yo, deep.
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:iconcheshirecastiel:
cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Well. I think I was pretty pissed at my family when I wrote this. Or something.
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:icondemonslayerroy:
demonslayerroy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's really good though
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:iconcheshirecastiel:
cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay. I'm just not comfortable w/ poetry.
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:icondemonslayerroy:
demonslayerroy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
don't be so negative, it's a great poem
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:iconcheshirecastiel:
cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconokaymemeplz: Okay....
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:icongraciegirl150:
graciegirl150 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconcheshirecastiel:
cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconblushplz: But that is not a critique. :icontherethereplz: I hate it.
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:icongraciegirl150:
graciegirl150 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I shall give you huge critique laterrrrrrrr. :iconletmeloveyouplz:
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:iconcheshirecastiel:
cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
-_-
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