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I'd Give Up Forever by cheshirecastiel I'd Give Up Forever by cheshirecastiel
And I'd give up forever to touch you
'Cause I know that you feel me somehow
You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be
And I don't want to go home right now

And all I can taste is this moment
And all I can breathe is your life
'Cause sooner or later it's over
I just don't want to miss you tonight

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And you can't fight the tears that ain't coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything feels like the movies
Yeah you bleed just to know you're alive

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am

Forever.


This is Eric(Maroon) and Toby(brown).
My and :icon4nowlost:'s own characters. We are writing a story for them. I can't tell you how dear to my heart these two are.
Uh, I worked really hard on this, so please give me feedback. :) A fave would be greatly appreciated.
:iconarigatouplz:
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I do like the picture yes. But I hate to point it out, the right person... is a little off. the ear is freaky low. Knowing you, if these are btoh buys, the right is also quite feminine. And I'm supposing that that's a touge.. that I'm trying real hard not to recognize as a lip. One is blushing a whole ton more that the other, btu i'm sure trhat's something to do with character personality
Overall... pretty..pretty pretty picture.
though I like the left side alot better
Now I feel like an ass....................Gomenasai, Mianhe, Sorry, Lo siento.
0_0 Sorry
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graciegirl150 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU ARE A GENIUS. I could never, NEVER do something that amazing. I love you Heather ^_^ :iconovariesplz:
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cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
heehee. :iconohstopityouplz:
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Pryate Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, it's really cute! I love the shyness of the characters and the tenderness emanating from this pic. Sorry not to give you an art critique as requested, but I hate to do this.
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cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks. ^^ I worked pretty hard on making them adorable. :icononionsighplz: Alas, it is still flawed.
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Pryate Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahah, nothing is perfect, and perfection is very subjective in art. The most important is emotion.
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cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
-_- :iconarigatouplz: You know all.
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Vallaton1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
cute aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww
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cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm really happy you like it. This comment means a lot. <3
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Vallaton1 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you are welcome
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so sweet :3
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